tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6896828610128111001.post981043229507606582..comments2023-11-02T22:19:26.176+10:30Comments on dude: The Great Race!dudehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02703004049654250967noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6896828610128111001.post-20781650363787211172009-11-05T21:05:45.787+10:302009-11-05T21:05:45.787+10:30remarked, thanks for adding paragraphs
8/8remarked, thanks for adding paragraphs<br />8/8Bill Kerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00206808014093631762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6896828610128111001.post-89602542826395413362009-11-02T09:25:09.350+10:302009-11-02T09:25:09.350+10:30Your critical evaluation of etoys is very good.
Y...Your critical evaluation of etoys is very good.<br /><br />Your writing could be edited and improved (spelling, line breaks, paragraphs), please do that to improve your final mark<br />6/8Bill Kerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00206808014093631762noreply@blogger.com